Strong sent in your big garden
Sweet sent in the house
WHAT IS AN OCEAN? https://www.google.com/search?
The enormous wave hits the solid sand
salt water creatures hiding in fear
waves constantly hitting the strong sand https://www.google.com/search?
sand flows through the salty water
crystal clear sea water
THAT IS AN OCEAN!
Something I like about my work: its on topic and I got interesting words
Something I need to work on: full-stops and capital letters
Something I like about my work: its on topic and I got interesting words
Something I need to work on: full-stops and capital letters
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