My Country "WALES"

    I like the way I did good detail on my work
    I think I should work on making the pictures smaller.
    So more things could fit in the drawing.
    I like the way I did cool pictures to make the
    drawing look outstanding.

matariki

so we were learning about matariki and mine presents Waipuna-a-rangi and he controls the rain.
something I liked about the art is the smile on the grounds face and the angry 2 angry clouds.
what I should do better is make the dirt a a bit bigger so it looks like real ground (the dirt's small.)
what I might do is... so I made faces on the clouds but I Coloured there whole faces in grey.

watermelon

Delicious Watermelon

Mmmm! The sweet smell in my nostrils. One of my favourite
fruit. I was pretty excited to try it. I couldn’t get my eye off
that juicy fruit. We all took a bite of that juicy fruit…
CRUNCH!! I was amazed of that juicy fruit. I tried
the skin it was pretty bright. The feel of the juicy fruit.
It felt like gel kind of. The white pips was as white as
a Polar bear. At the start it looked like a pickle but the
big fruit was 124x bigger than a normal pickle and then
I wanted more. Mmmmm and 3 more juicy fruit mmmm!
But I gave one to my friend. But the black pips was as
black as a Black bear. It was kind of yuck!