persimmons YUM

Persimmons

It was coming around the juicy persimmons was just
waiting to get eaten by the humans. We were sniffing that
marvelous Persimmons. We had to lick it “thats weird”
I said in my mind. Iv’e had this before so its not going
to taste that bad. We took a bite CRUNCH! “That kind
of sounded like ASMR”.

My friend was laughing right next to me.
I was trying not to laugh because his laugh
is pretty funny. So I held my laughter in. it
was yummy and I would never forget to get
that moment of trying the yummy juicy fruit. And I felt like more.

I want more. Is there any more? I quietly
said it was so yum that It was as juicy as
a watermelon. It was going to be a refreshing day
for me but not sure some people. I love this day right
now and I hope I see it in the future. YUMMY YUMMY
YUMMY…

By Manawanui

Yr6

food for thought

We learnt about kinds of foods, liquids and reading labels. It was pretty fun but a little bit boring at the same time. Diary foods have fibre. Something I did that I liked is how I got to know more stuff. Something I should work on is... Different foods. 

POEM w/ buddy

hi this is my poem i did with my little buddy "LEO" this was a fun day but some bits were tough... something I liked about is how me and my buddy drawing MR.House and the creatures He was going to eat... something we should do is do more creative stuff THIS WAS I FUN DAY!

BEST POEM DONE!

FLOWERS. flowers are growing

Strong sent in your big garden

Sweet sent in the house

WHAT IS AN OCEAN?                    https://www.google.com/search?                     

The enormous wave hits the solid sand

currents moves fast and it really dirty

salt water creatures hiding in fear

waves constantly hitting the strong sand                                                                                                          https://www.google.com/search?                 

sand flows through the salty water

crystal clear sea water

THAT IS AN OCEAN! 

Something I like about my work: its on topic and I got interesting words

Something I need to work on: full-stops and capital letters

sunsmart

watermelon

Delicious Watermelon

Mmmm! The sweet smell in my nostrils. One of my favourite
fruit. I was pretty excited to try it. I couldn’t get my eye off
that juicy fruit. We all took a bite of that juicy fruit…
CRUNCH!! I was amazed of that juicy fruit. I tried
the skin it was pretty bright. The feel of the juicy fruit.
It felt like gel kind of. The white pips was as white as
a Polar bear. At the start it looked like a pickle but the
big fruit was 124x bigger than a normal pickle and then
I wanted more. Mmmmm and 3 more juicy fruit mmmm!
But I gave one to my friend. But the black pips was as
black as a Black bear. It was kind of yuck!

deli watermelon

Delicious Watermelon

Mmmm! The sweet smell in my nostrils. One of my favourite
fruit. I was pretty excited to try it. I couldn’t get my eye off
that juicy fruit. We all took a bite of that juicy fruit…
CRUNCH!! I was amazed of that juicy fruit. I tried the skin it
was pretty bright. The feel of the juicy fruit. It felt like gel kind of. The white pips was as white as a Polar bear. At the start it looked like a pickle but the big fruit was 124x bigger than a normal pickle and then I wanted more. Mmmm and 3 more juicy fruit mm mm! But I gave one to my friend. But the black pips was as black as a Black bear. It was kind of yuck!

summer poem

I hope you will like my summer poem look in and have a nice day

winter

Winter

The frost tingling on my face.My body shivering like a bowl jelly.

Feet so red that my feet are going to explode like TNT.

My backyard is covered in fog outside like a smoke boom exploding.

My fireplace dazzling in the cozy warm lounge.

My hands are numb like an ice cube with frosting flying  in the gloomy sky.

My ears are as cold as a dark rainy cloud.

My blanket is flufffy like a cat.

pepeha

rubber life.

a boring rubber Life

Rubber when someone rubs it will feels like fire on my back
and face having a red face and back for a long time. Until my
face and back is fine i’m used and it hurts so bad. Bouncing up
and down at the end of the term and people punching me. They
probably think i’m nothing me getting burnt a lot and them
distracting my sleep. And I never get to run away because I
have no feet and hands so I have no point living. When i’m
getting burnt and i’m not getting that much sleep I just want
peace and quiet. ;( And people spelling names on my face
and I just want quiet and its pitch black. In there i’m with a
pencil that will stab me and I will have nowhere to escape.
In this cramped desk I… I.... just don’t like this I don’t like my
rubber life.  

haunted graveyard.

Haunted Graveyard.

Once a pona time there was a graveyard where no one went to.
Beacause it was so haunted. Doors opened ghost going around
to haunt people who dares to come in the graveyard. Bones and
skulls by the path way inside in the haunted graveyard. Bats
screaming. Rats sniffing. Zombies hands coming out of the
grave stone. Blood dripping plop plop plop! The eagles hungry.
Stoats biting rats. When kids walk beside by the gate they will
scream or cry. And the hawks fighting the eagles.
Zombies crawling like a wired person. And then when the
graveyard went bigger and bigger it ruled the whole world
and no one was alive just zombies and stoats and rats and
hawks and the eagles were dead cause of the hawks killing them
at night time.   

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