Persimmons
It was coming around the juicy persimmons was just
waiting to get eaten by the humans. We were sniffing that
marvelous Persimmons. We had to lick it “thats weird”
I said in my mind. Iv’e had this before so its not going
to taste that bad. We took a bite CRUNCH! “That kind
of sounded like ASMR”.
waiting to get eaten by the humans. We were sniffing that
marvelous Persimmons. We had to lick it “thats weird”
I said in my mind. Iv’e had this before so its not going
to taste that bad. We took a bite CRUNCH! “That kind
of sounded like ASMR”.
My friend was laughing right next to me.
I was trying not to laugh because his laugh
is pretty funny. So I held my laughter in. it
was yummy and I would never forget to get
that moment of trying the yummy juicy fruit. And I felt like more.
I was trying not to laugh because his laugh
is pretty funny. So I held my laughter in. it
was yummy and I would never forget to get
that moment of trying the yummy juicy fruit. And I felt like more.
I want more. Is there any more? I quietly
said it was so yum that It was as juicy as
a watermelon. It was going to be a refreshing day
for me but not sure some people. I love this day right
now and I hope I see it in the future. YUMMY YUMMY
YUMMY…
said it was so yum that It was as juicy as
a watermelon. It was going to be a refreshing day
for me but not sure some people. I love this day right
now and I hope I see it in the future. YUMMY YUMMY
YUMMY…
By Manawanui
Yr6
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