My Country "WALES"

    I like the way I did good detail on my work
    I think I should work on making the pictures smaller.
    So more things could fit in the drawing.
    I like the way I did cool pictures to make the
    drawing look outstanding.

Book review/ Big Nate

Big nate

By Lincoln Peirce

Illustrator: Andrews McMeel

Made in 2012

My opinion: for 5-15 yr old

I would recommend the story because it is
funny and he is really naughty and always gets in
trouble that makes me laugh sometimes. He has a
scary teacher the is always grumpy to Nate if he does
something wrong or if he doesn’t want to talk to the class. 

My rating in this book is 8-10

Because its funny and intresting to read.

I liked about my review is my font that made it interesting to read.

matariki

so we were learning about matariki and mine presents Waipuna-a-rangi and he controls the rain.
something I liked about the art is the smile on the grounds face and the angry 2 angry clouds.
what I should do better is make the dirt a a bit bigger so it looks like real ground (the dirt's small.)
what I might do is... so I made faces on the clouds but I Coloured there whole faces in grey.

persimmons YUM

Persimmons

It was coming around the juicy persimmons was just
waiting to get eaten by the humans. We were sniffing that
marvelous Persimmons. We had to lick it “thats weird”
I said in my mind. Iv’e had this before so its not going
to taste that bad. We took a bite CRUNCH! “That kind
of sounded like ASMR”.

My friend was laughing right next to me.
I was trying not to laugh because his laugh
is pretty funny. So I held my laughter in. it
was yummy and I would never forget to get
that moment of trying the yummy juicy fruit. And I felt like more.

I want more. Is there any more? I quietly
said it was so yum that It was as juicy as
a watermelon. It was going to be a refreshing day
for me but not sure some people. I love this day right
now and I hope I see it in the future. YUMMY YUMMY
YUMMY…

By Manawanui

Yr6

food for thought

We learnt about kinds of foods, liquids and reading labels. It was pretty fun but a little bit boring at the same time. Diary foods have fibre. Something I did that I liked is how I got to know more stuff. Something I should work on is... Different foods. 

POEM w/ buddy

hi this is my poem i did with my little buddy "LEO" this was a fun day but some bits were tough... something I liked about is how me and my buddy drawing MR.House and the creatures He was going to eat... something we should do is do more creative stuff THIS WAS I FUN DAY!

BEST POEM DONE!

FLOWERS. flowers are growing

Strong sent in your big garden

Sweet sent in the house

WHAT IS AN OCEAN?                    https://www.google.com/search?                     

The enormous wave hits the solid sand

currents moves fast and it really dirty

salt water creatures hiding in fear

waves constantly hitting the strong sand                                                                                                          https://www.google.com/search?                 

sand flows through the salty water

crystal clear sea water

THAT IS AN OCEAN! 

Something I like about my work: its on topic and I got interesting words

Something I need to work on: full-stops and capital letters