POEM w/ buddy

hi this is my poem i did with my little buddy "LEO" this was a fun day but some bits were tough... something I liked about is how me and my buddy drawing MR.House and the creatures He was going to eat... something we should do is do more creative stuff THIS WAS I FUN DAY!

BEST POEM DONE!

FLOWERS. flowers are growing

Strong sent in your big garden

Sweet sent in the house

WHAT IS AN OCEAN?                    https://www.google.com/search?                     

The enormous wave hits the solid sand

currents moves fast and it really dirty

salt water creatures hiding in fear

waves constantly hitting the strong sand                                                                                                          https://www.google.com/search?                 

sand flows through the salty water

crystal clear sea water

THAT IS AN OCEAN! 

Something I like about my work: its on topic and I got interesting words

Something I need to work on: full-stops and capital letters