matariki

so we were learning about matariki and mine presents Waipuna-a-rangi and he controls the rain.
something I liked about the art is the smile on the grounds face and the angry 2 angry clouds.
what I should do better is make the dirt a a bit bigger so it looks like real ground (the dirt's small.)
what I might do is... so I made faces on the clouds but I Coloured there whole faces in grey.

persimmons YUM

Persimmons

It was coming around the juicy persimmons was just
waiting to get eaten by the humans. We were sniffing that
marvelous Persimmons. We had to lick it “thats weird”
I said in my mind. Iv’e had this before so its not going
to taste that bad. We took a bite CRUNCH! “That kind
of sounded like ASMR”.

My friend was laughing right next to me.
I was trying not to laugh because his laugh
is pretty funny. So I held my laughter in. it
was yummy and I would never forget to get
that moment of trying the yummy juicy fruit. And I felt like more.

I want more. Is there any more? I quietly
said it was so yum that It was as juicy as
a watermelon. It was going to be a refreshing day
for me but not sure some people. I love this day right
now and I hope I see it in the future. YUMMY YUMMY
YUMMY…

By Manawanui

Yr6